A Brief History of a Story: A Bride's Tale

After rereading A Bride’s Story by Kaoru Mori, this time as a hardback manga instead of online, I got the urge to write a story. That was last year. These new Along the Silk Road stories I’ve been writing inspired me to actually write it, so last week, when I was told to take a sick day (as I was about to walk out the door) I spent over an hour looking for my summary (which turned out to be in the place I should have looked first).

( writing angst )

So my question is, should I spend lots more hours getting the story right (while other stories call for attention, I’m only a chapter or two from being done with Diego and Lavender’s story and almost to a bit of love in the Gestures sequel)? Or post it and forget it? Or maybe post it now (which will remove some of the urgency I’m feeling) and fix it as I have time, maybe with a few suggestions from the comments, if any?

Any Ideas?

Info

In case anyone is interested, I have another lj account under the pen name I plan to use when I get around to publishing (I so wish I had more self motivation)  and since lj keeps threatening to take down inactive accounts, I decided to post stuff from my Story Ideas doc. 

So if anyone is interested in character sketches, summaries, and beginnings my me, you may read them here: rayeanncarter