A Balance of Harmonies: Competing

I think I’m going to have to rework Gestures to add more of Colt’s attraction to his two hunks. This read-through (tenth, maybe dozenth in the last few months) I’ve caught all sorts of mistakes (I’ve spelled the planet’s language in several different ways) and places where I need to add feelings and what Colt eyes are lingering over and I’m only at page 40 of 99. I’ve also just realize that both Orion and Python are men who can do anything they put their minds to, which is quite the turn-on for Colt. Maybe he just loves Lion for his body.

But I think I’ve discovered some of these because I had to solidify things in my head for the sequel (like what the Port looked like), so I wonder if I shouldn’t spend some quality time finishing it up and then hit the first story again.

Title: Competing
Series: A Balance of Harmonies (Three)
Status: Chapter one hundred sixteen of gobs
Genre: m/m romance, drama, city life, businessmen
Rating: R
Content: watching a workout, blessings, cookies, showing off, family, night flight, running away, joining the club
Length: about 3,300 words
Summary: Emil makes cookies. Peregrine visits his parents. And Kurt shows off.

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( Peregrine’s blessing ran in multitudes )