A Balance of Harmonies: All Sparkly

I just finished typing in my caveman-space story, Gestures. I wrote the first 10k back in August 2010 and the last 24k last month. But both bouts of writing were only a week long. But in going over the story, I’ve found several inconsistencies I need to fix. Like Colt’s boss went from Mr. Robertson to Robinson. The cave planet is Deresla 3, or that’s Colt’s planet and the cave planet is Deresla 2. (Or should that be Deresla II and III?) A cot turned into a bed, so the scene will need to be rewritten because four people will never fit on a cot mattress even if it’s lying on the floor. “Headman” became “Grandfather” maybe because he is Lion’s grandfather. Colt’s drawers became boxers, the island ships are allowed to land on changed names, and the containers they carry stuff in are knapsack, bag, and satchel by turn (although that might be all right). I also need to find a prestigious middle name (or several) for one character.

It will take lots of work, but the arduous part is over.



Title: All Sparkly
Series: A Balance of Harmonies (Three)
Status: Chapter sixty-eight of many
Genre: m/m romance, drama, city life, businessmen
Rating: R
Content: determination, dark thoughts, morning, vagueness, coffee, no sleep, tears, music, pets, fantasy, names, size, reasons, breakfast
Length: about 2,500 words
Summary: Peregrine doesn’t sleep. Kurt tells of his fears. And Emil discusses animals.

Master list



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